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DotLD: Adjusting the Rules

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As I mentioned previously, I realized early on that I'd need to tweak the rules to fit the new gameboard and score card. Mostly, this just means changing a few words and references to coincide with the different layout.

I also wanted to add some flavour text to expand the story -- really just to explain why the score sheet is a bowling score sheet. Tweaking the rules was easy, but I found that the story part was difficult. I couldn't decide how to approach it and I had three very different ideas: humorous, serious, and irreverent. I started with humorous, but quickly discarded it after re-reading what Mads already had, which seemed to have more of a serious feel to it.

So naturally I tried irreverent next. Aaaaand... it didn't work out. Oh, I liked it well enough, but the proliferation of four-letter words and colourful metaphors made it decidedly NOT kid-friendly.

Serious it is -- and I tried to keep it fairly brief so as not to make the rule book into an actual book.

In addition to the above, I toyed around with adding graphics to it. While it did look good, the graphics took up space and almost doubled the number of pages. Simple is good: I ended up scrapping all the graphics and opting instead for a beefed-up title and some thematic header fonts.

Just to reiterate: I have NOT changed any of the rules for playing the game. I've done some re-wording and moving around of things, but that's it.

It's pretty close to being done now. Anyone interested in taking a look can view it here: DotLD Alternative Rules Draft (PDF)
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Looks good so far. On a quick glance through didnt spot anything glaringly off kilter.
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  • Posted Sun Nov 27, 2011 2:20 am
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Looks good. And I'm impressed that you even took the time to rewrite the rules.

New files are up on the game page, btw.
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  • Posted Tue Nov 29, 2011 9:12 am
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Making the typeface just a bit smaller would allow all of your revised rules to fit on 4 pages (or 2 pages front and back).
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  • Posted Tue Nov 29, 2011 9:04 pm
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Thanks all for the comments!

I didn't spend a lot of time on the rules -- really all I did was just a little reformatting and moving around. Except for the intro story... whistle Actually, most of the time I spent on the rules was deciding whether to include images. Leaving the images out was the way to go; the extra length they would have added to the rules just wasn't worth it.

I'm going to tweak some size and spacing to get the rules down to 4 pages (thanks, Judy!), then I'll send all the files to Mads for final review/approval before posting them to the game's file page.

I'll be printing out a copy tomorrow to take with me on a short trip up to Edinburgh this weekend, so I plan on getting some quality game time in on the train!
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  • Posted Tue Nov 29, 2011 11:29 pm
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You probably want to change the components to say "at least 8 dice" and count the "Hour" die.
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Ah, thanks for the catch, Judy! I updated the rules file and sent everything off to Mads.
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