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Some errors:
"You can only play only one"
"turn-over" (it's "turn over")
"its effects than last" than/then
Some suggested rewrites:
"You may select one in play" to "You may select one he has in play" (several places).
"This continues until one of you cannot, or does not, discard" to "This continues until one of you cannot, or does not want to, discard"
Also the "this is a fixed distance and cannot be increased" part might just confuse more than help. Sure, an extra gun won't help your panic, but what about Scope/Binoculars?
Maybe you should include the different edition names of some of the cards? Like Scope and Silver.
And if you could save this in .pdf instead, i know a lot of people would appreciate it.
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- Edited Mon Dec 21, 2009 6:20 pm
Posted Mon Dec 21, 2009 6:18 pm
