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Hi. This expansion looks great, but for some reason, the term "Odd jobs" doesn't sit right with me, because, when writing instruction sheets that account for this expansion, things like this don't flow well: "If a player has the surveyor odd-job occupied, they may search through the discard pile and select one they desire from there". It seems to me that a one-word substitute would be better. I'd suggest "Assistant", but feel free to use something else (a thesaurus might help here).
I'd also suggest that, since the word "Bank" is written in big letters across the place on the game board (not yours, the one that comes with Puerto Rico) where the money is kept, that you rename yours to "Investment house", "Mutual fund", "Superannuation", or something similar.
In one place, you misspelled "Cathedral" as "Cathedeal" (in the Cathedral section, last mention before the examples).
I must say, though, that between this and your other buildings, it looks like you've produced some of the most worthwhile fan expansions.
Thanks
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