It would be nice, however, if the turn sequence was not spit over two pages. If you moved the setup and other pre-game stuff to page 2 it would be possible to play the game without having to turn pages. (Edit) Or, you could add a 3rd page with just the turn sequence...
First of all, great review and quite to the point.
Concerning the English: well, no matter how many times a day I write documents in English somehow every time I have to write in a subject I did not encounter before I feel crippled. I'm glad it came out right this time