It is a big glory for me to hear that from You. I hope you won't find mistakes. If there will be any, please inform me and I'll correct them.
Here's one important correction:
The Baron. You need to place at least three new Squires in the area in order to place the Baron inside that area. Three new Squires for large areas and also three new Squires for small areas (and not 2 as you wrote!)
The difference between big and small there's only for the Special Ability of the Constable. Two new Squires to block big areas and one new Squire to block small areas.
There are some small typos (Number instead of numbered, Squares instead of Squires) but the document is really well done!